Sunday, September 11, 2011

Critique ... Dam!

My friend at the camera club, and a very competent photographer, adjusted my Derwent Dam photos in photoshop for me. He also gave me some constructive criticism, which is very helpful. I'm off to Google what it means lol.
Before ...
After ...
The critique ... The Derwent Dam pic. is fine.  I might have ventured a little further down towards the water ( I take it you can swim ?) so that the turret cleared the skyline rather than being buried in it. ( Bad tangent ) It would make it look more impressive. Being me, if you let me loose on a picture in front of me on my computer I cannot resist playing with it so my adjusted version is a little chunkier.

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